| Okay, so far, there really isn't much going on. But I'm working on rewriting the second chapter. I've thought about some of the stuff that really hasn't made sense and changed bits and pieces here and there, but it really doesn't make sense yet. I don't think it ever will; I don't want to deviate so much from what I originally wrote that no one will have a clue what I'm talking about. All well. There's going to be more description of entering the base, inspired by the episode "In the Line of Duty" and the occasional shots of the entrance to Cheyenne Mountain. I still don't know what I'm going to do about NORAD. Maybe make a slight mention about... something? If you have any ideas, please e-mail them to me. |
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